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"Where None Will Ever Be" Student short film, feedback would be nice.


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#1 Jan Bastian Marthinsen

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Posted 21 May 2014 - 08:00 AM

Hi everyone,

 

I'm a graduated student from 8 1/2 months program at The European Film College in Denmark. I would love to get some feedback on the final "exam" short film I was DOP on. Here is the link:  password: wnweb

Best regards Jan Bastian


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#2 Wajeb G. Wahab

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Posted 08 June 2014 - 03:33 PM

I liked the lighting and coloring, I just honestly didn't understand the story.

 

I don't understand why he's alone, where did everybody leave? etc.


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#3 Jan Bastian Marthinsen

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Posted 09 June 2014 - 10:55 AM

It was all natural lighting and it was all shoot on a Black magic pocket camera and color graded in Davinci resolve.

 

The story is pretty simple, is about a boy who lives in a post apocalyptic world, alone with his teddy, where the water has turned poisonous.


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#4 Bill DiPietra

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Posted 09 June 2014 - 11:45 AM

I liked the film in its entirety very much.  Very nice compositions, but they seemed pretty washed out.  That was my only complaint, but I've  noticed that on a lot of BM productions.

 

Nice work, though.


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#5 Jan Bastian Marthinsen

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Posted 10 June 2014 - 10:44 AM

Thanks a lot Bill!


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