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Short Nature Film, Critique Please!


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#1 Shane Astaire

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Posted 13 July 2014 - 12:43 PM

This is my first short film, don't critique it too harshly but I want honest opinions. Let me know what you think! Thank you! 

 

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#2 Luke Mason

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Posted 13 July 2014 - 11:26 PM

Good work, I noticed that the music sounds very peaceful, however most of the editing and camera movement did not express this kind of peacefulness, also for a nature film it's advisable to maintain a deep focus 70-80% of the time, so people get to appreciate all the details.
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#3 Shane Astaire

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Posted 13 July 2014 - 11:36 PM

Thank you for the post, i appreciate the advice! 


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