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#1 Brandon Fields

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Posted 16 August 2014 - 01:55 PM

Hey guys! I'm new here but glad I found this forum.

I'm new to filmmaking in general but have always had a passion for film especially in the realm of horror. Just recently, I took a risk and just did my first short horror film.

I recently completed a little 2 minute short for a contest with Chiller TV. I didn't win...but I got out of my comfort zone and took a risk. I LOVED IT, though I told myself I should just give up and quit.

I realized after feedback from multiple people, my story for this short was very weak. Hard to follow. 

Putting myself out there with all my mistakes but wanted to share it with you guys and get your thoughts in it.

This was shot with a Canon 1100d and edited with Final Cut Pro:

 

-Brandon


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#2 Phillip Mosness

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Posted 09 January 2015 - 03:53 AM

Is this still up?

Do we need a password or something?

Thanks


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#3 Brandon Fields

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Posted 09 January 2015 - 02:08 PM

Hey Phillip. Thanks for responding. This was an older post, so I had changed the privacy settings. You should be able to view the short now.

Edited by Brandon Fields, 09 January 2015 - 02:09 PM.

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#4 Marc Anthony Sepulveda

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Posted 14 January 2015 - 03:52 AM

If it got you out of your comfort zone then I think this pice did it job. Looked decent for a first time. Can't wait to see what you do next.


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