Posted 12 February 2016 - 06:07 PM
Please do watch the second episode of my Web series "Diary Of Porsha"
Posted 15 February 2016 - 06:52 PM
She fainted, she didn't die
In reply to Freya's post, you posted, "
Posted 28 December 2015 - 01:28 PM
I'm glad you like it... To answer a few of your questions.
Yes, she died at the end."
Posted 15 February 2016 - 07:06 PM
Posted 15 February 2016 - 08:23 PM
I'm gonna try to give you some constructive criticism here.
The camera shakes way to much for a piece like this. It should be on a gimbal or steadycam. The sound was a bit weird, and the laughter just didn't fit in at all. If you are going with laughter, at least it has to sound good. It can't cut like that.
I like the location, but I feel like you could have utilized it more.
Posted 16 February 2016 - 06:34 PM
Posted 16 February 2016 - 08:29 PM
I actually like the incongruent laugh track but i.m.h.o. it takes so long to get there setting things up with the tilt down and pan and him deciding to go talk to her.
When he says "hello, hi" at around 00:53 i.m.h.o. is when it starts to get interesting
I can't wait to see the next one!
Posted 17 February 2016 - 01:03 AM