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#1 Young Pizzy

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Posted 12 February 2016 - 06:07 PM

Hello guys
Please do watch the second episode of my Web series "Diary Of Porsha"

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#2 JD Hartman

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Posted 13 February 2016 - 09:11 AM

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If she died at the end of Ep1, is this her twin? 

Don't like the laugh track or the jittery panning either.


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#3 Young Pizzy

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Posted 15 February 2016 - 05:31 PM

She fainted, she didn't die
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Posted 15 February 2016 - 06:52 PM

She fainted, she didn't die

 

Really?

In reply to Freya's post, you posted, "

Posted 28 December 2015 - 01:28 PM

Thanks Freya
I'm glad you like it... To answer a few of your questions.
Yes, she died at the end."


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#5 Young Pizzy

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Posted 15 February 2016 - 07:06 PM

Oops! Dat was a mistake, she just passed out... she didn't die!
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#6 Jan Tore Soerensen

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Posted 15 February 2016 - 08:23 PM

I'm gonna try to give you some constructive criticism here. 

 

The camera shakes way to much for a piece like this. It should be on a gimbal or steadycam. The sound was a bit weird, and the laughter just didn't fit in at all. If you are going with laughter, at least it has to sound good. It can't cut like that.

 

I like the location, but I feel like you could have utilized it more. 


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#7 Young Pizzy

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Posted 16 February 2016 - 06:34 PM

Thanks for criticism Jan, will work more and improve on your points
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#8 Wiliam Cardoza

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Posted 16 February 2016 - 08:29 PM

I actually like the incongruent laugh track :) but i.m.h.o. it takes so long to get there setting things up with the tilt down and pan and him deciding to go talk to her.

 

When he says "hello, hi" at around  00:53  i.m.h.o. is  when it starts to get interesting :)

 

I can't wait to see the next one!


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#9 Young Pizzy

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Posted 17 February 2016 - 01:03 AM

Thanks William, did you watch the first episode? The next episode will be up asap!
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#10 Wiliam Cardoza

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Posted 17 February 2016 - 01:34 AM

yes I checked it out.


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