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#1 Mark Williams

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Posted 21 April 2017 - 04:33 AM

This is my concept trailer for a proposed new film that has UK government HMRC SEIS approval This means up to 70% of investment in tax relief. The film will be set at an American airbase in the UK. I'm also looking for investors.

 

www.vimeo.com/214146101

 

 

 


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#2 aapo lettinen

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Posted 21 April 2017 - 06:43 AM

I would change some of shots which have cinematography issues (or if not possible, reframe them) , add more closeups and maybe drop some airplane shots. I would've loved to see more alien shots. I know it's a concept trailer but it might sell better this way :)


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Posted 21 April 2017 - 08:27 AM

Thanks aapo :)


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Posted 21 April 2017 - 10:37 AM

I think the explosions and gun flashes are a little heavy handed ie look too 'video'...you could probably tone them down a bit. I think you could easily tone down a few of the other CGi bits too to improve them...a bit more edge blur?  Nice concept trailer though.


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Posted 21 April 2017 - 01:41 PM

Thanks Rob :)


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