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#1 Tanul Dilwali

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Posted 29 July 2017 - 10:49 AM

Hi,

 

Please take a look at my some of my work. Technical as well as creative feedback would be much appreciated.

 

Thanks in advance.

 

Tanul

 

 

 


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#2 Macks Fiiod

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Posted 29 July 2017 - 07:26 PM

From a technical perspective on the first couple shots, the highlights look way overblown. I guess carry around some NDs in the future?


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#3 Landon D. Parks

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Posted 30 July 2017 - 12:12 AM

Having viewed both reels - it's good, but not great. A lot of blown-out shots. As Macks says, I'd try to explore some ND options for your camera.


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#4 Tanul Dilwali

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Posted 31 July 2017 - 10:17 AM

From a technical perspective on the first couple shots, the highlights look way overblown. I guess carry around some NDs in the future?

 

 

Having viewed both reels - it's good, but not great. A lot of blown-out shots. As Macks says, I'd try to explore some ND options for your camera.

 

For the wedding teaser, that was the look intended. However, point duly noted. Thank you :)

 

Keen to hear more from other members 


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#5 Simon Wyss

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Posted 01 August 2017 - 05:16 AM

First video bores me from second eight on. To be totally honest, from the first shot on because I don’t like handheld shooting. You don’t build up tension, content remains flat. I mean, the ethnical and cultural differences between Claire and Sid invite for, say, a little more depth.

 

Second video quite different, there is involvement with people. Got me.


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