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#1 Dan Watt

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Posted 05 August 2017 - 04:00 PM

 

Hello all, I finally put together a reel of the work I've been doing so far this year and I'd really like some feedback. For the past several months I've been pursuing this full time, taking as many low budget and no budget jobs as I can get off Craigslist and Mandy but I am finding its very hard to get much work past the no-budget stuff. So far it seems that everybody I've shot for has been very happy with the work, even hiring me back for other jobs so I think I'm okay but still, can't land much new work. 

 

Anyway I'd love some feedback as I'd really like to know what I need to do to improve. I generally want to do narrative and music video work so I've cut my reel with that in mind. 

 

 


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#2 Santiago Bazan

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Posted 25 September 2017 - 07:55 AM

Hi Dan!
Thanks for share. Nice works! I love your 1st scene! where comes from? I'd like to watch it!
About the edition, I'd move the woman giving birth after the guy drinking oil and then:
1. (guy drinking oil)

2. (woman giving birth)

3. travelling to desert guy (1:07)

4. black singer with the mic

5. rapper

6. rock band

7. guy sleeping

8. your end

In my opinion, 0:52 scene is not necessary.

best,

Santiago


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